for her…????

Its a common notion that we "Pinoys" are hopeless romantics,Hey the least we can do is admit it right?well here’s one of my brain child free verse poem(a.k.a produkto ng walang magawa),dedicated to a girl/lady wherever she is .anyways just want to share this one…feel free to send your feedbacks…if you dare!!!!
joke…Isa pa ngang case ng RED HORSE Dyan!!!
~Sweet Devotion~
Lone that road
i see a smile
i feel a little shiver
but never wondered why
I looked at your eyes
and my mind just stop
my heart keeps on beating
but i cant feel myself breathing
Is something wrong with me
guess i’ll never know
this is a bit crazy
but i have to keep it slow
yet something deep inside me
make me feel i should let you know
You make me feel
like a man should feel
like a man of steel
you are my sweet devotion
Apologies i ask from you
if its a bit of a shock
a smile from you to me
is too much to ask,
but if its a sign for me
to know your all good
and everythings A OK?!
I hope you’ll be kind enough
to share your smile
and make my day all worthwhile.

One Response to “for her…????”

  1. Debbie Says:

    hey that’s deep! haha… and who’s that lucky girl? or maybe it’s been a while coz uv posted this ages ago..hehe

    how r u? makin more money? any plans of goin back to school? just browsing around… God bless, dont forget to thank God for all the opportunities that come ur way, lessons learned and experiences. God speed. tc!

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